“Relax!” Danny exclaimed. “You want me to relax while I’ve got a jellyfish wrapped around my leg and you’re running with sharp objects?”
“Jogging. I was jogging with sharp objects.” Steve corrected as he came to a stop This actually made me laugh. Your dialogue has a great natural flow. Nicely done.
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“Jogging. I was jogging with sharp objects.” Steve corrected as he came to a stop
This actually made me laugh. Your dialogue has a great natural flow.
Nicely done.