H50 Fic - A True Patriot

[shinysylver]

Title: A True Patriot
Author:shinysylver
Characters/Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count: 300
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Summary: Danny is a touch ticklish.
Author's Note: I wrote this for Round 2 Week 2 of sd_ldws. The prompt was to write a PWP story with the word Navel/Belly Button. My entry got me through another week so I am happy!



“What do you think you’re doing?” Danny squirmed and tried not to laugh as Steve’s tongue made its way around his belly button before dipping inside. “Stop it! That’s gross!”

Steve pulled his head up and looked at Danny in disbelief. “Gross? Seriously? My tongue has been in much more questionable places than your navel.”

“Yeah, well I don’t like it,” Danny muttered, not meeting Steve’s eyes.

“I wonder why?” Steve kept his eyes on Danny’s face as he dipped his tongue back into Danny’s navel. “Could it be because you’re ticklish here?”

“No,” Danny replied doing his best to stifle a laugh but unfortunately, his trembling belly gave him away. “Okay fine, I’m ticklish. Now would you just stop?”

“I could,” Steve acknowledged. “Or I could do this.”

Steve circled Danny’s navel one last time with his tongue before trailing it further down to trace the length of Danny’s cock. He circled the head slowly, dipping into the slit, before pulling away and looking at Danny. “Still want me to stop?”

Danny arched his hips up, seeking Steve’s mouth. “I will kill you if you stop now.”

Steve laughed and dropped his head down to swallow Danny down in one smooth motion. His lingering laughter sent vibrations up Danny’s cock causing him to moan and thrust forward.

Steve let him thrust for a moment before firmly grabbing him by the hips and bobbing his head quickly, occasionally pausing to hollow his cheeks and suck. Finally, when Danny was close Steve started humming causing his orgasm to rip through him as he came hard.

Later as they lay tangled together, Danny tilted his head to look at Steve. “The Star-Spangled Banner? You seriously hummed The Star-Spangled Banner while blowing me?”

“What can I say?” Steve asked. “I’m a true patriot.”

Comments

[fuflowers.livejournal.com]

True patriot, indeed, Steve.
We may need more patriots like Steve, I think. And I think there should be a study done on that...or a quiz or random survey or something.

We could get Danny to do it! With a clipboard and a pen, going door to door, taking notes...if, that is, we can get him out of Steve's bedroom for some "serious work." Then again, maybe he is doing the "serious work" --he's doing all the research we'll need, yes?

Excellent job! This made my afternoon!

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

I don't think Danny wants to get out of bed long enough to do any surveys. ;)

I'm glad I could brighten your day! Thanks for reading!

[crzymm3.livejournal.com]

Ok seriously can't stop laughing.

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

[somehowunbroken]

Ahaha, oh Steve :)

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

He's a special boy. ;)

Thanks for reading!

[whogeek.livejournal.com]

**giggles** Oh Steve, you are a special goof, but you are Danny's goof, and he loves you just the way you are. Well, except for the diving-into-danger thing. He could deal with less of that. Then there would be more time for more of this. XD

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Steve is such a special, wonderful goof. *happy sigh*

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

[loveinadoorway.livejournal.com]

Oh great. Sanguine2 just made me bawl and immediately after, you make me giggle like a loon.

Good thing there's no one here but my cats - and I think they gave up on my sanity a long time ago.

[loveinadoorway.livejournal.com]

Oh, btw, I somehow was thinking Steve would hum the Hendrix version of the Star Spangled Banner.
So much more BAMF.

[wadjet-theperv.livejournal.com]

Totally LOL

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Now see I was picturing the President's Own Marine Band version because he's a big SEAL dork. :D

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Cats are very accepting creatures. Plus they think we're crazy anyway just because we aren't feline.

Glad it gave you a laugh! Thanks for reading.

[whittyrabbit.livejournal.com]

what about sexy eye?! Steve should hum their song! No complain about being patriotic. lol

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Sexy Eyes has such a generic dance beat. Danny totally would have missed that. Steve's probably done that other nights. ;)

Thanks for reading.

[wadjet-theperv.livejournal.com]

Deeeelicious.

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

[kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com]

This was awesome!

I like that Steve and Danny are teasing each other--I like seeing them being so beautifully light-hearted with each other--damn sexy.

Great work :)

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Thanks! It is nice to see the light teasing. Take a bit of a break from angst.

Oh? What's that? Next week's challenge is angst you say? LOL.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

[lasamy.livejournal.com]

OH, Steve! NGH

[purple-spock.livejournal.com]

Very cute and made me smile. Great work. : D

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[donna mezza (from livejournal.com)]

I nearly chocked on the shaved ice I was eating lol. Thank you x

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Hee! I'm glad you liked it!

[finduilas-clln.livejournal.com]

Oh Steve, your patriotism is admirable! :)