shinysylver: (H50 - Steve/Danny - So Very Canon)
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Title: The Journey
Author: [livejournal.com profile] shinysylver
Characters/Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count: 500
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: None
Summary: Life with Danny is always about the journey.
Author's Note: I wrote this for Round 2 Week 8 of [livejournal.com profile] sd_ldws. The prompt was a photo prompt. You can see the photo here. Our word count was up to 500 and I wish I'd had just a little bit more but I like the results anyway. I didn't end up winning but Runner-Up is pretty good. :D




“So then this guy in a toga jumped off the stage and into the crowd--”

“Danny, you’re supposed to be telling me about getting tasered,” Steve interrupted.

Danny glared at him. “I’m getting there but first you have to know the set up.”

Steve sighed heavily.

“Hey, you’re the one who asked. I warned you it was a long story but you still wanted to know.”

Steve rolled over to face Danny. “So far all you've talked about is your sister sneaking out to go to a Halloween party at some college in Hoboken. I don’t see what that has to do with anything. Unless Julius Caesar was the one who tasered you?”

“No he wasn’t, but he did knock over the guy who...” Danny trailed off. “No. You know what? You don’t want to hear it so I’m not going to tell it. Long story short, I got tasered and it wasn’t pleasant.”

Danny flopped over with a huff, his back to Steve, but before Steve could say anything he shot back up and pointed at him. “And you know what? The next time you want to tell me all about your epic napalm-loving treks through the jungles of Afghanistan I don’t want to hear it.”

Steve couldn’t help the laugh that escaped. “Seriously Danno? The jungles of Afghanistan? Napalm? You obviously don’t listen to me anyway. My life was nothing like Apocalypse Now.”

“Whatever,” Danny said flapping his hand dismissively before laying back down.

Steve frowned at Danny’s stiff back. He really was upset. Steve hadn’t meant to hurt his feelings, he just hadn’t realized that the important part of the story was about Danny’s little sister and not the tasering. Sometimes he was so focused on the endgame that he forgot that for Danny the journey was everything.

Steve hesitantly scooted closer to Danny and reached out to lay a hand on his arm. When Danny didn’t object to the touch, Steve wrapped his arm around him. “I’m sorry.”

Danny relaxed fractionally, enough for Steve to pull him back against his chest. “So tell me about Marie and the frat party.”

“It doesn’t matter,” Danny said in a dull voice. “It’s not a big deal. I got caught in a brawl. The cops mistook me for one of the drunk college kids and tased me.”

Steve slid his hand down over Danny’s. “I still want to hear about Marie. What did you do when you finally found her?”

“You really want to know?” Danny asked quietly.

“Yes,” Steve replied. He leaned forward and kissed the side of Danny’s neck. “I like hearing about your family.”

Danny must have heard the wistful note that Steve tried to smother because he turned around and looked straight into Steve’s eyes. “Oh babe, they’re your family too. They certainly consider you family. Did I tell you how my mom told me not to mess it up with you? That she’d take your side...”

Steve smiled and settled in for the journey.

Date: 2011-07-07 05:27 pm (UTC)
ext_384643: (Steve/Danno backtoback)
From: [identity profile] sexycazzy.livejournal.com
Awww! :D

Date: 2011-07-09 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-07 05:43 pm (UTC)
bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (flower crowns 1))
From: [personal profile] bradygirl_12
Beautiful characterization! And they're so sweet together. :)

Date: 2011-07-09 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-07 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] finduilas-clln.livejournal.com
Awww, that's so beautiful. They're so wonderful together.

Steve couldn’t help the laugh that escaped. “Seriously Danno? The jungles of Afghanistan? Napalm? You obviously don’t listen to me anyway. My life was nothing like Apocalypse Now.”
I loved that line!

Amazing job on this! I loved it so much!

Date: 2011-07-09 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Date: 2011-07-07 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lou-c.livejournal.com
The 'family' paragraph? *nods. Want Steve to have that.

Also made me giggle because we've decided the same thing about my sister's bf. He's much tidier...

Date: 2011-07-09 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Hee! My dad's mom told him that about my mom. :D

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-07-07 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
This was awesome!

I like that Steve realizes that sometimes he just needs to kick back and let Danny jabber away, especially when he's talking about his family.

And I say jabber in the most affectionate way--lovely work on this :)

Date: 2011-07-09 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Danny does jabber a bit doesn't he?

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-09 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-07 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vamp-rose36.livejournal.com
Awww Loved this so much!!

Date: 2011-07-09 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-07 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-highway.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwwwww ♥ So cute and so sweet and so them in a cozy moment.

Date: 2011-07-09 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-07 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabel1984.livejournal.com
Aww how lovely, sometimes all you need to do is listen x

Date: 2011-07-09 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2011-07-07 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basket-ofposies.livejournal.com
loved this so much<3

Date: 2011-07-09 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-07 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doc-3.livejournal.com
Awwww... too sweet. I love them being so ... them.

Date: 2011-07-09 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-08 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] forcellari.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this peek into their "quiet" time. I mean, Danny is nowhere near quiet, but the whole scene has an understated, comfortable feel as Steve slowly learns more about their relationship. Way to go!

Date: 2011-07-09 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D

Date: 2011-07-08 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loveinadoorway.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwr!
Sweet!

And the conga rats are strutting their stuff for you, runner up is not a bad thing at all!

Date: 2011-07-09 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-08 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caliecat.livejournal.com
This was such a wonderful "slice-of-life" fic and I loved this line:

Sometimes he was so focused on the endgame that he forgot that for Danny the journey was everything.

Date: 2011-07-09 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
It seems to me that is one of the biggest differences between the two. :D

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-08 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purple-spock.livejournal.com
This is so cute and sweet and such a perfectly normal interaction, which I love. Great work. : D

Date: 2011-07-09 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2011-07-09 06:36 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-09 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-07-10 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whogeek.livejournal.com
Oh Steve. You silly boy. It really shouldn't matter how long it takes Danny to get to the point. It's always more fun just getting there. **smishes them**

Date: 2011-07-12 02:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading!

Date: 2011-07-12 12:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donna mezza (from livejournal.com)
How beautiful. Steve really needs to feel loved and I think that Danny's family would love him. Great story x

Date: 2011-07-12 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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