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Title: Three Times the Radio Was Right
Author: [livejournal.com profile] shinysylver
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count 877
Rating: pg
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Summary: Steve's not superstitious about much.
Warning: none
Authors’ Note This is more fic spawned from the episode discussion in [livejournal.com profile] team_steve. This was a fast write and not nearly as cracky as the thread got but I hope you all still enjoy it. This one is for you [livejournal.com profile] patchcat and [livejournal.com profile] michele659.



Steve wasn’t a superstitious man. Some of the men he’d served with in the Navy had been. They’d carried lucky tokens or worn Saint medallions but not Steve. He’d always just relied on himself to make his own luck. He was good at that. But there had been three times in his life when he felt like something, whether fate or God he didn’t know, had intervened to guide him.

The first time was when he was a teenager. Mary and her friends had been fond of playing the radio game. They would ask a question then turn on the radio to try and find the answer in the song lyrics. He’d always thought it was silly, after all what possible truth did Madonna hold about whether or not Johnny had a crush on Mary? But they had sworn by it. Mary had told him that it was the universe speaking to them which had just made Steve laugh.

He hadn’t believed in any of that hokum until his mom’s death. He had been devastated by the loss and on top of his grief; he had been so angry that his father was making him move to the mainland away from all of his friends. And making everything worse, he had to leave right in the middle of his record breaking football season. The weeks before he left were a particularly difficult time in the McGarrett household. He and Mary were both battling their father at every turn trying to change his mind or at least express just how angry they were. Then one night after a particularly intense fight with his father he had stormed up to his room and turned on his radio full blast only to be greeted with the lyrics:

California Dreamin’
On such a winter’s day


And he suddenly realized that getting out of this house getting away from everything would be like leaving the cold of winter behind. Suddenly he couldn’t wait to get to the mainland and California. He was done with this crap. It was time to start new somewhere else.

One time might have just been a coincidence. He had been having enough trouble with his father that he was bound to look forward to moving out eventually, song or not. But when it happened a second time he began to believe that maybe Mary had been on to something after all.

The second time had happened many years later shortly after he had begun SEAL training. He hadn’t talked to his father much since he’d been sent to the mainland. There had been the obligatory Sunday evening phone calls while he’d finished high school but when he moved on to the Naval Academy they had grown even further apart, he just hadn’t seen the point. He was still bitter that his father had always put his job before his family and decided that they would both be better off if they didn’t force a tense relationship full of fights.

Then after one particularly grueling weekend of training he’d gotten in his car and wearily turned on the radio only to catch the last few lines of “Cat’s in the Cradle.”

He'd grown up just like me,
My boy was just like me


And those words hit him like a brick. He hadn’t seen his family in years. He hadn’t talked to his father for months. He was becoming the kind of man he’d hated his father for being. That night he had called his father and made plans to visit Hawaii on his next leave. And now, he was very grateful for the renewed relationship that he had before his father was killed a few years later. If he hadn’t had that time with his father he didn’t know if he would have ever forgiven himself.

So by the time he turned on the car radio and heard “Sexy Eyes” blaring over the speakers he was a firm believer that signs and portents could come over the radio waves. Danny hated the song of course, which Steve found terribly entertaining, but he loved it. He loved to give Danny trouble and anything that got him that worked up was good in Steve’s book.

Steve was amused by the situation and wasn’t taking it seriously until he just happened to look up and meet Danny’s eyes when he heard the fateful lyrics.

I looked up, what did I see?
Sexy eyes


He knew then in that moment that he was in love with Danny and had been for a while. It wasn’t even a shock. It just felt right. Danny’s gorgeous blue eyes were staring at him so full of life as he bitched about the song that Steve was momentary mesmerized before he remembered to return to their normal banter. Someday he would tell Danny how he felt, maybe even tell him when he knew, but now wasn’t that day so instead Steve commented on Danny’s tie and watched him puff up in annoyance.

He was going to have to tell Mary she had been right. The radio game really could tell your future…or at least make you understand yourself a little better. But no matter what he still didn't believe that her Ouija board was real.

Date: 2011-03-15 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com
Now this is a feel-good fic, and I'm wearing this stupid grin. I liked the idea that Steve knows its not the time to declare his love, but yes, he will so know when that moment comes. Thanks for sharing it.

Date: 2011-03-15 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it put a smile on your face!!

Date: 2011-03-15 06:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michele659.livejournal.com
Oh,I loved this! Thank you so much for writing it!
It was touching and sweet,and it had humor but wasn't cracky(unlike our conversation,lol).
I especially loved the last part and Steve's realizations about Danny when he heard the song. :D

Date: 2011-03-15 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

I really thought I was going to be cracky and then realized that I was just incapable of going there. Steve wanted to be just a little superstitious not full on crazy.

I love the idea that Steve just knows how he feels and is content to wait. :D

Date: 2011-03-15 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bi-nocturnal-g.livejournal.com
You're fic made me smile, and not many do that.

LOL When the time comes Danny will be bitching all about the impossibility of it and Steve's going to roll his eyes and kiss all the disbelief out of him. ^_^

Date: 2011-03-15 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad I made you smile!

When the time comes Danny will be bitching all about the impossibility of it and Steve's going to roll his eyes and kiss all the disbelief out of him.

*nods* Yes and he will tell him just to see Danny get all bitchy about it so that he can kiss him out of his rant. Steve is devious that way.

Date: 2011-03-15 09:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magenta-storm.livejournal.com
Naw, that's adorable. I'm grinning like an idiot right now.

This has so become part of my head-canon :)

Date: 2011-03-15 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it make you smile!

Date: 2011-03-15 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
This was adorable!

I liked getting Steve's POV, from his younger days into his adult years, and reading his thoughts on one Det. Danny Williams is always awesome :)

Date: 2011-03-15 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I wanted to touch on his history a bit which just makes me want to do it more!

reading his thoughts on one Det. Danny Williams is always awesome :)

In my book anything with the two of them in the same vicinity is awesome. :D

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 2011-03-15 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whogeek.livejournal.com
**giggles** Oh Steve, you are such a silly. At least you kinda understand it a little better than Mary and her friends probably did. XD

Date: 2011-03-15 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it!

He is a bit goofy isn't he? Danny might have the goofy thumbs but Steve is just one big...really scary...goofball. But you're right. I think he gets what the songs are really doing but the teenage girls had no idea.

Date: 2011-03-15 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] powrhug.livejournal.com
What a cool premise for a fic! Very nicely done.

Date: 2011-03-15 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

I tell you joining [livejournal.com profile] team_steve has been great at encouraging me to write different kinds of stories.

Date: 2011-03-15 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patchcat.livejournal.com
Ha! The power of nekkid Steve compelled you! XD

This was adorable! No, not as cracky as our conversation, but all the better for it, I think. This way he's just the tiny touch superstitious like the rest of us and not completely off his rocker.

I really loved that the song was what pushed Steve into repairing his relationship with this dad, and that it was a song that made him realize how he felt about Danny.

Date: 2011-03-15 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
The power of nekkid Steve could compel me to jump off a bridge.

I'm glad you liked it!

This way he's just the tiny touch superstitious like the rest of us and not completely off his rocker.

If he was as superstitious as our convo he would have had a psychiatric discharge years ago. :D

Date: 2011-03-15 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sanguine2.livejournal.com
excellent !!!
and not just for the feel good effect-
love reading young Steve!

Date: 2011-03-16 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm kinda surprised that I liked doing young Steve but it was kinda fun.

Date: 2011-03-17 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sanguine2.livejournal.com
I get that you were surprised - but, when you think about how much of what happened to young Steve drives his character now, writing him becomes a perfect way to tap into adult Steve-always a fun prospect!

Date: 2011-03-15 07:56 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (H50 - Steve/Danny 2)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Heh, Steve learns life lessons from teenage girls--I love it!

Date: 2011-03-16 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
LOL! I never exactly thought about it that way.

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 2011-03-15 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] americandirrty.livejournal.com
I love this!

Date: 2011-03-16 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 2011-03-15 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loki256.livejournal.com
awwww, *puddles*
this is sooo good, i always love reading about the inner workings of the mcgarrett mind, maby if he askes the radio when/how he should tell danny rightn now by akon will come on...
i just hope he tells danny soon, although knowing danny his reaction will probably be something along the lines of "uh, duh. you're not nearly as subtle as you think babe". lol

Date: 2011-03-16 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
McGarrett's is definitely an interesting mind to delve into :D

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Date: 2011-03-16 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purple-spock.livejournal.com
This is really great. Cute and a great look into Steve, and made me smile. : D

Date: 2011-03-16 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that it made you smile! Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 2011-03-16 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-04-08 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebilchickens.livejournal.com
Really dig this. Like how you wrote this, pretty unique idea and I think it fits Steve. A good read.

Date: 2011-04-08 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2011-07-20 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teddibear.livejournal.com
Awww I love this. I love how fitting the songs you chose are at the moments of his life. What a great use for Sexy Eyes as well. Just lovely. Fate has an interesting way of interfering with our lives and this through the radio for Steve was just lovely.

Date: 2011-07-20 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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