H50 Fic - Unfulfilled
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shinysylverTitle: Unfulfilled
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shinysylver
Characters/Pairing: Danny; Danny/Rachel and preslash Steve/Danny
Word Count: 486
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Spoilers: 1.23
Summary: After the events of 1.23 Danny is finding himself strangely unfulfilled.
Author's Note:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
mmom Day 10. That's right folks, I wrote a wank coda to the episode. How is this even my life?
Danny lay awake staring at the ceiling. He had everything he wanted. Rachel was asleep next to him and Grace was down the hall. His whole family was back together again. So why did he feel so empty--no that wasn’t the right word. He was unfulfilled.
Danny sighed and got up to go to the bathroom. He closed the door and splashed some water on his face. What was wrong with him? He hadn’t even been able get it up at all tonight. He was in bed with his very beautiful wife—girlfriend—whatever she was now and there hadn’t even been a twitch. He’d had to claim that he was still suffering the after effects of the sarin from last week.
He sat down on the edge of the tub and rubbed his eyes tiredly. He knew that the problem wasn’t actually his plumbing because just that afternoon he’d been over at Steve’s for a beer and when Steve had changed shirts his pants had gotten very tight, embarrassingly tight.
Danny tried his best to push that image away but the visual of a very shirtless Steve standing before him wouldn’t leave and once again his body started to react. Figuring that the best way to get rid of the fantasy would be to indulge it, Danny pulled his cock out of his boxers and began to stroke.
After a moment he grabbed the lotion off of the counter to help with the dry drag of his hand on his dick. Once he was slicked up he started jerking fast, letting his mind wander back to that time a few months ago when he’d walked in on Steve showering at headquarters. The way Steve’s muscular ass had looked as he’d bent over to pick up the soap.
Honestly, it had been like something right out of a prison movie and he had stood transfixed, wondering what it would be like to touch and squeeze and wanting more than anything to sheath himself in Steve’s tight ass. When he’d realized that he was standing in the door daydreaming about fucking his partner he’d turned and fled.
Danny swallowed hard at the memory and squeezed his dick tighter, imagining he was fucking Steve now. When he closed his eyes he could see Steve looking up at him, eyes dark with arousal, as he thrust deep and hard. All it took was three more pulls and he came, his orgasm ripping through him.
Once he came back to himself, he reached for the toilet paper and began cleaning up. He didn’t know what was wrong with him. He was sitting in the dark bathroom, jerking off to fantasies of Steve while Rachel slept in the next room and it made him feel dirty. It was almost like he was cheating, but the worst part was that he was having trouble figuring out who he was cheating on.
Author:
shinysylverCharacters/Pairing: Danny; Danny/Rachel and preslash Steve/Danny
Word Count: 486
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Spoilers: 1.23
Summary: After the events of 1.23 Danny is finding himself strangely unfulfilled.
Author's Note:
mmom Day 10. That's right folks, I wrote a wank coda to the episode. How is this even my life?Danny lay awake staring at the ceiling. He had everything he wanted. Rachel was asleep next to him and Grace was down the hall. His whole family was back together again. So why did he feel so empty--no that wasn’t the right word. He was unfulfilled.
Danny sighed and got up to go to the bathroom. He closed the door and splashed some water on his face. What was wrong with him? He hadn’t even been able get it up at all tonight. He was in bed with his very beautiful wife—girlfriend—whatever she was now and there hadn’t even been a twitch. He’d had to claim that he was still suffering the after effects of the sarin from last week.
He sat down on the edge of the tub and rubbed his eyes tiredly. He knew that the problem wasn’t actually his plumbing because just that afternoon he’d been over at Steve’s for a beer and when Steve had changed shirts his pants had gotten very tight, embarrassingly tight.
Danny tried his best to push that image away but the visual of a very shirtless Steve standing before him wouldn’t leave and once again his body started to react. Figuring that the best way to get rid of the fantasy would be to indulge it, Danny pulled his cock out of his boxers and began to stroke.
After a moment he grabbed the lotion off of the counter to help with the dry drag of his hand on his dick. Once he was slicked up he started jerking fast, letting his mind wander back to that time a few months ago when he’d walked in on Steve showering at headquarters. The way Steve’s muscular ass had looked as he’d bent over to pick up the soap.
Honestly, it had been like something right out of a prison movie and he had stood transfixed, wondering what it would be like to touch and squeeze and wanting more than anything to sheath himself in Steve’s tight ass. When he’d realized that he was standing in the door daydreaming about fucking his partner he’d turned and fled.
Danny swallowed hard at the memory and squeezed his dick tighter, imagining he was fucking Steve now. When he closed his eyes he could see Steve looking up at him, eyes dark with arousal, as he thrust deep and hard. All it took was three more pulls and he came, his orgasm ripping through him.
Once he came back to himself, he reached for the toilet paper and began cleaning up. He didn’t know what was wrong with him. He was sitting in the dark bathroom, jerking off to fantasies of Steve while Rachel slept in the next room and it made him feel dirty. It was almost like he was cheating, but the worst part was that he was having trouble figuring out who he was cheating on.
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Date: 2011-05-10 05:08 am (UTC)I love this line. Beautifully written. I like how you described the conflict that Danny has. Poor Danny. :)
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Date: 2011-05-10 05:12 am (UTC)When I got that line I knew I had a fic. And it does seem to fit. I like the idea of a conflict in Danny between what he thinks he wants and what he really needs.
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Date: 2011-05-10 05:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 05:33 am (UTC)I can totally see Danny thinking he has everything he ever wanted only to realize what he really wants is Steve.
It does seem like maybe Danny needs to remember why he and Rachel didn't work in order to realize what he has in front of him.
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Date: 2011-05-10 05:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 05:34 am (UTC)Thank you for reading and commenting!!
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Date: 2011-05-10 06:17 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 06:19 am (UTC)Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2011-05-10 06:22 am (UTC)Poor Danny!
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Date: 2011-05-10 06:29 am (UTC)That line just hit me like a ton of bricks, so I'm glad it worked out. :D
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Date: 2011-05-10 06:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 02:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 07:15 am (UTC)I always got the feeling(since we first saw the two of them together)that Danny had unresolved issues and regret about his marriage. I thought she had some,too.Those situations often lead to the "fallback"(as Jerry Seinfeld calls going back to the ex).
The mind tends to remember the good and tone down the bad(especially since Danny's been foolishly not realizing he's IN a relationship and has someone he loves until now).
But nothing's really changed between Danny and Rachel so I don't see how things would be any different this time.
I loved the last line also!
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Date: 2011-05-10 03:00 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Date: 2011-05-10 04:44 pm (UTC)I really wish the writers hadn't gone down this road. I know they all want character driven stories,etc,but I don't want this to turn into a soap opera.
Sorry-OT.
I really did like the mix of angst and longing,and Danny's feelings of regret combined with need.
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Date: 2011-05-10 07:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 02:52 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2011-05-10 01:19 pm (UTC)Danny may think he wants his life back with Rachel but clearly bis body knows that he wants to be with Steve instead.
My heart breaks for the Williams family and for Steve because they are all going to get hurt in all of this drama.
Great work on this :)
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Date: 2011-05-10 02:59 pm (UTC)Damn, but this was angsty--but in a good way.
I swear, I've been writing the angstiess wank. I should make a whole subgenre of Wangst. *nods*
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Date: 2011-05-10 01:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 02:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 05:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 08:11 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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Date: 2011-05-11 03:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-12 03:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 07:57 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-10 08:10 pm (UTC)Now do Steve!WANGST.
Not demanding at all are we? ;)
I swear it seems like all I write is angsty wank. Who would have thought self-love could be so angsty? Well except my angst-whore of a muse.
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Date: 2011-05-10 08:13 pm (UTC)For great fic from great writers? Always, babe. But I shall be patient. ;-)
See, I'm not capable of writing short stuff, you saw my wank fic, I can't shut up. I am in awe of peeps who can wow me in under 1000 words. ♥
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Date: 2011-05-10 08:17 pm (UTC)And your wank fic was awesome. Just the right length.
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Date: 2011-05-11 02:03 am (UTC)*hugs you*
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Date: 2011-05-12 03:20 am (UTC)*hugs back*
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Date: 2011-05-11 05:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-12 03:22 am (UTC)I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2011-05-11 06:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-12 03:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-07-10 04:56 pm (UTC)It was almost like he was cheating, but the worst part was that he was having trouble figuring out who he was cheating on.
Oh Danny.
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