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Title: Cut My Life into Pieces
Author:[livejournal.com profile] shinysylver
Characters/Pairing: Steve/Danny; background Danny/Rachel
Word Count: 930
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Warning: Rough sex
Summary: Danny wants payback.
Author's Note: [community profile] kink_bingo 2011: Penance/Punishment. This is a follow up to Tear My Heart Open and I Set Fire to Our Bed. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] somehowunbroken for the support and beta. The title is from the Papa Roach song "Last Resort."



Danny had been in a temper all week. He was always full of bluster, running hot, but this time his temper was cold and biting. Chin and Kono had both fled his wrath, but not Steve. Steve merely smirked. He knew that he was in Danny’s head, knew that he had gotten under Danny’s skin so deep that he couldn’t ignore him, and if Danny wanted to throw a temper tantrum about it, then Steve would sit back and enjoy the show.

After a week of Danny’s anger, Steve was looking very forward to their usual bathroom encounter, shivering just thinking about the pounding he was in for. When he got to the bar, though, he found Chin and Kono sitting alone, and had to endure an extremely uncomfortable two hours with an aching erection. Finally, when he was sure that Danny wasn’t running late, he made his excuses and went home.

Once there he went immediately to bed but wasn’t able to sleep. He was still half hard and knew that he could jack off to ease his tension but he didn't feel like he deserved to.

Steve didn’t know why Danny had skipped drinks, but was afraid that maybe this time things really had gone too far and Danny was done with him. Until that week they had always managed to keep this thing between them out of the office, but he had gone and ruined that. Not only that, but Steve had actually told Danny to go back to Rachel. What if he'd listened?

He was jerked from his thoughts by the front door opening and sat up straight in bed, reaching for his gun.

“Steve!” Danny bellowed up the stairs.

Steve let out a relieved breath at the sound of Danny's voice and closed the nightstand drawer. “What?”

He heard Danny stomp up the stairs, each heavy footfall sending a pulse to his dick.

“What do you think?” Danny asked angrily as he came into the bedroom.

Steve leaned lazily against the head board, trying his best to appear nonchalant as he watched Danny begin to unfasten his belt. “I think your wife must be wondering where you are.”

“Shut up,” Danny yelled. He managed to get his pants off and tossed them aside. “Don’t talk about her.”

“Or what?” Steve challenged.

“Roll over,” Danny growled.

Steve complied, doing his best to hide how excited he was. He buried his head in his folded arms and took deep calming breaths while he waited to see what Danny was going to do. He didn’t have to wait long. Suddenly his boxers were yanked down roughly over his hips and Danny smacked him hard right on his ass. He wasn’t expecting the sting and jerked at the impact.

“That was for the little trick you played on me,” Danny muttered. He smacked Steve’s other cheek. “And that’s for talking about my wife.”

Steve lay perfectly still. He knew that he could stop this and throw Danny off, but he didn’t want to. Danny had left his own house late at night to come see Steve. That thought alone was enough to make Steve’s cock painfully hard against the mattress. He sure as hell didn’t want to do anything that would make Danny leave now.

Danny shifted around and then Steve felt Danny’s cock sliding up and down his crack. Steve moaned and spread his legs farther apart.

“Look at you,” Danny said, smacking Steve’s ass again. “You’re such a slut for it, aren’t you?”

“Mmmm,” Steve moaned, pressing back against Danny’s cock, trying to rub his own against the mattress.

Danny put a hand against Steve’s back and pressed him down firmly. “None of that. You don’t deserve to come.”

Steve hissed as Danny pressed two fingers roughly inside him, Danny pumped his fingers in and out of Steve slowly, curling them to press against Steve’s prostate. Steve began to squirm, trying to push back against Danny’s hand, needing more, but Danny held him firmly in place.

“Please,” Steve gasped.

“Please what?” Danny asked, pressing his fingers against Steve’s prostate and leaving them there.

“Need more,” Steve begged. “Fuck me.”

Danny withdrew his fingers and nudged at Steve’s hole with his leaking cock. “No condom.”

“I don’t care,” Steve replied, pressing back as far as he could against Danny’s cock.

Danny thrust forward, driving into Steve hard. He lay across Steve’s back, holding him against the mattress while he fucked into him fast, hips snapping forward violently. Steve closed his eyes, enjoying Danny’s warm weight against his back, enveloping him, surrounding him, in him.

Steve’s cock was confined against the mattress but even without touching it he began to feel the familiar tingle gathering in his spine. He was so close that a few more thrusts at just the right angle—

“No you don’t,” Danny gasped, pulling out and sitting back against Steve’s thighs. “I said you don’t deserve to come.”

Steve was dazed and desperately pressed down against the mattress, hoping for any friction that he could get. He was vaguely aware of the quick slap of skin as Danny jacked himself, but was still surprised when he felt streaks of hot come striping his back. Danny rubbed his hand through the come, which pushed Steve over the edge. He came with a jerk, shuddering against the mattress.

“You’re pathetic,” Danny said as he got off the bed.

Steve rolled over to look at him. “So what does that make you?”

Danny didn’t answer and Steve watched as he gathered his things and left without a word.

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Date: 2011-08-17 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loveinadoorway.livejournal.com
And again she says oh dear... Can they come back from that? This is so fucked up and.. well, unfortunately so fitting.
Oh dear.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jksgirl.livejournal.com
Soooo hot! They're addicted to each other, wherever that leads.

Love Danny marking Steve with his come.

Danny is punishing himself as much as Steve.

I'm hoping the muses continue to feel generous!

Always love your writing

Date: 2011-08-18 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I think addiction is a good word to use here. :D

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teddibear.livejournal.com
Ow ow ow you hurt my heart. Man these two are so broken, I don't think there is any coming back. They're getting to the point where they are going to soon hate each other. Eventually the sex is not going to be enough to bring them together anymore. Poor boys.

Danny sorta got his revenge but he still couldn't stop Steve. They're both kind of pathetic :(

I love this little series. So angsty and painful. Poor boys.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
If they stay on this path, you're right they will have nothing left but hate.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you are enjoying the series!

Date: 2011-08-17 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuflowers.livejournal.com
I don't think I should be liking this as much as I do. But I can't help myself.
So fittingly them, oddly enough.

Excellent job.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Date: 2011-08-17 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pug83.livejournal.com
"Soooo hot! They're addicted to each other, wherever that leads.

Love Danny marking Steve with his come.

Danny is punishing himself as much as Steve.

I'm hoping the muses continue to feel generous!

Always love your writing"

I totally quote jksgirl...

Please, eventually fix this situation: is obvious that they love each other!

Date: 2011-08-18 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I can say that things will change.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying the series!

Date: 2011-08-17 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleyoso.livejournal.com
I'm loving this!
But...there's more to come (no pun intended) right????
They are so miserable like this!!! (what does it said about me? I'm loving it!!!) XD
Thank you very much for writing!
looking forward to the next part!

Date: 2011-08-18 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading! I do indeed have a rough plan for the next part. :D

Date: 2011-08-17 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmalee3400.livejournal.com
Oh boys, why?
I find myself feeling more sympathetic towards Steve. Danny is starting to get to me, as is Rachel which is funny since she's not even in the story, yet I find myself wishing her out of existence.
Anyways hope to see more of this soon.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Danny is pushing so hard right now but don't worry I think he's about to break.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theellibu.livejournal.com
I love how they can’t stay away from each other... I probably shouldn’t enjoy how miserable they are as much as I do, but I can’t help it. You keep hitting all the right buttons with this! :)

Date: 2011-08-18 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I love how they can’t stay away from each other

It's like gravity.

I'm so glad you're enjoying this series! Thank you so much for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] finduilas-clln.livejournal.com
*rolls around in this verse*

LOVE IT SO MUCH OMG.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 10:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabel1984.livejournal.com
Oh god, those poor poor boys! xx

Date: 2011-08-18 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
They are a bit shattered right now...

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 11:19 am (UTC)
seleneheart: (five-0)
From: [personal profile] seleneheart
This is an amazing series -- an interesting portrait of two people who try so hard to hurt each other but don't seem like they will ever be done with each other.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Danny wants so much not to want and Steve wants so much to be wanted...destructive combo that. I'm glad you are enjoying the series!

Date: 2011-08-17 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] americandirrty.livejournal.com
I can't get over this story, I love it so much! Something about these two being rough with each other and angry in the bedroom is so hot. I really hope you decide to write more because these stories are so great.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the ride!

Date: 2011-08-17 11:58 am (UTC)
ext_411194: (Grief Steve)
From: [identity profile] jazzybabe56.livejournal.com
poor boyz! this is riveting - and I want - no, I NEED - moar!!

Date: 2011-08-18 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] forcellari.livejournal.com
Oh! Oh! The last exchange of dialogue gives me the shivers!

I love that Steve is starting to feel worried that he'd gone too far. And even the fact that he's so attached to this thing now that he feels guilty jacking off without it. Gosh, you can just catch a glimpse of his vulnerability in the little things.

Date: 2011-08-18 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you noticed that little bit of penance on Steve's part. Steve is definitely vulnerable here, he's in love and has allowed it to get twisted just so he doesn't lose it. Danny has issues too though...

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you are enjoying the ride.

Date: 2011-08-17 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tibbslover.livejournal.com
Oh this is all so fucked up. I want sunshine and roses and everything.

Why are they unable to work it out???

This whole cold, evil thing is really getting to me. I want them to make up and be happy

BUT awesomely written!!!

Date: 2011-08-18 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Why are they unable to work it out???

They are both too lost in the cycle right now.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
I know I said this the last time but I'm going to say it again: DAMN!!

I don't think either one of them is capable of stopping this destructive game--they are both too addicted to it.

I'm almost afraid to ask for more--but in a good way. Great work on this fic :)

Date: 2011-08-18 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying the ride. :D

Date: 2011-08-17 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] littleeva.livejournal.com
They are both to the point of no return. Very sick and twisted.

Oh, yeah, I LOVE this series.
Edited Date: 2011-08-17 01:08 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-08-18 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
They have a few issues yes. ;)

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] witchy99.livejournal.com

You write beautifully. I normally hate love triangles with a passion, but I adore this. I feel so bad for Rachel though! I know she won't be, ever, but I still hope she'll be okay...

Date: 2011-08-18 04:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I normally hate love triangles to yet I'm writing it...IDEK. Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakespherical.livejournal.com
God, that was so damn hot! You have to keep going until they recognize that they belong together. Rachel would not put up with late night fuck buddy calls. :)

Date: 2011-08-18 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Trust me, Rachel has about had enough. It's not like they are being subtle after all.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lasamy.livejournal.com
omg hotttt!!!! Should wait for the winter to read these, maybe? *fans*

Date: 2011-08-18 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
You can always reread them. :D

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bfive0.livejournal.com
And here we go again .... by the way there's a big hole where my heart used to be .. just though you'de like to know!!!

Date: 2011-08-18 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-17 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snoewhite.livejournal.com
guh! *don't mind that pool of goo on the floor that is just my brain where it leaked out of my head*

Date: 2011-08-18 04:01 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-08-17 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donna mezza (from livejournal.com)
Again Danny instigates the sex. He is taking it to the next level and this is so good. You are a brilliant writer. Please please post more quickly xxx

Date: 2011-08-18 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it!

Date: 2011-08-18 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] powrhug.livejournal.com

Steve rolled over to look at him. “So what does that make you?”


Oh! Loved that, my favorite part, oddly enough. I like that you're showing Steve's bite as well, even if he craves being taken.

Date: 2011-08-18 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
Steve craves Danny however he can get him, but he's still Steve and I'm glad that's coming through. :D

Thank you for reading!
Edited Date: 2011-08-18 04:00 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-08-20 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
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I LOVE THESE. MORE PLZ THANKS.

Date: 2011-08-20 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinysylver.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying them! Thanks for reading!
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