H50 Fic - The Ring

[shinysylver]

Title: The Ring
Author:shinysylver
Characters/Pairing: Malia; unrequited Chin/Malia
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Summary: Malia can't move on.
Author's Note: mmom Day 24. So yeah...I wrote Malia. The image of that ring around her neck just hit me today so here you go.


She couldn’t move on and didn’t want to forget. She should hate him for pushing her away, but she couldn’t, instead wearing his ring over her heart, heavy on its chain. During the day its weight was a familiar comfort. And at night she always held it in one hand, her vibrator in the other. As she came she would squeeze it so tightly that the diamond would cut into her palm, making his presence real to her. And after her orgasm passed she would wash away the blood and welcome the ring shaped pain in both hand and heart.

Comments

[jesseofthenorth.livejournal.com]

So poignant. Well done, and what a cool choice to look at Malia as well. Nice tight writing too.

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Malia doesn't get very much love at all. Or angst. ;)

[whittyrabbit.livejournal.com]

As Im wondering if I run out stuff to write for mmom, (I know, may is a whole month.......) I want to say that I love malia !!!!!! I prefer her over lauran for chin. Now since lauran is out of the question, she should get back with him (chins back with hpd and everything ). Chin needs to get laid too.

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!

[whogeek.livejournal.com]

Oh, oh, Malia. This is a wonderful look through her mind. Beautiful.

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

Thank you! The way she is still wearing that ring. When you think about it is heartbreaking especially with the show seeming to have dropped her in favor of Chin crushing on Laura just long enough for her to die. *shakes head*

Anyway, thanks for reading!

[somehowunbroken]

How do you keep writing wankfic that makes me want to hug people?

[shinysylver.livejournal.com]

It's a special gift? Or I have a twisted relationship with self love? Or I'm an angst whore? I don't know but I'm glad it moves you in some manner. :D

Thanks for reading!

[teddibear.livejournal.com]

Love that image of "ring shaped pain." Poor Malia. I am so glad the show fixed that one. They are so adorable together. Lovely wangst dear.