H50 Fic - Insecurities
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shinysylverTitle: Insecurities
Author:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
shinysylver
Characters/Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count: 630
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Summary: Steve wants her to know that Danny is taken.
Author's Note: This was written for a prompt at![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
h50kinkmeme. This is my second fill today. That meme is addictive. Here is the original prompt:
Danny/Steve, Marking Danny
Steve has to have Danny marked/branded, he wants everyone to know D belongs to him and him only. (Hickeys, bruising, but not as in abuse, idc up to author)
Danny poked Steve’s arm which was wrapped tightly around his chest. “I need to go.”
Instead of moving his arm, Steve hooked his right leg over both of Danny’s legs and pulled him even closer, rubbing his half-hard cock against Danny’s hip in the process.
“Come on Steve, you know I have to go,” Danny said as he tried to wriggle free.
Steve sighed and loosened his grip just long enough to rise up on his knees and straddle Danny. “I hate that you’re going with her.”
Danny closed his eyes. He hated the insecurity in Steve’s voice especially since he was the one who put it there. He opened his eyes and raised a hand to rub Steve’s arm gently. “It’s a parent teacher meeting. We both have to be there.”
Steve sighed heavily. “I know. But that doesn’t mean I like it.” He glanced over Danny’s head at the clock. “You don’t have to be there until five right?”
“Right…” Danny said hesitantly. “Which means I need to leave now.”
“It means you need to leave in five minutes,” Steve corrected.
Before Danny could protest, Steve leaned down and kissed him roughly. Just as Danny started to return the kiss, Steve pulled back and began to nip his way down Danny’s jaw until he reached the sensitive spot just under Danny’s earlobe—the spot that through some sort of strange biology had a direct line to his dick.
Danny moaned and struggled not to buck his hips as Steve began to suck earnestly, pausing to lave his tongue over the sensitized skin before sucking again. “Steve—come on—everyone will see that, not just Rachel.”
Steve pulled away and looked down at Danny seriously. “Too bad.”
Danny sighed. He reached up and cupped Steve’s face gently. “I really am sorry. You know that right?”
Steve nodded but Danny saw the vulnerability in his eyes. He knew that it was going to be a long time before Steve felt comfortable with him around Rachel. Maybe he never would.
“Alright, alright,” Danny muttered looking up at Steve. It might be embarrassing to show up at a parent teacher meeting with a large hickey on his neck but if it made Steve feel better he would do it. He owed him that much. “You have two minutes to make that thing as dark as you can before I really do need to leave.”
Steve smiled and leaned down to continue his mission. Once his two minutes were up he reluctantly rolled off of Danny and leaned back against the pillow to watch as Danny got ready to leave.
Danny got up and padded over to the mirror to examine his neck. There would be a very dark bruise there before long. “What are you a vacuum cleaner? You only had five minutes.”
“I have many skills,” Steve replied. He gestured at Danny’s erect cock. “You seemed to like it well enough.”
Danny frowned down at his dick. “You just had to pick that spot under my ear. You know what it does to me.”
Steve grinned. “Yup. This way I figure you have more incentive to come home as soon as you can.”
Danny pulled on his pants and shifted around trying to hide the very obvious bulge. “You better take care of this as soon as I get back. Where’s my tie?”
Steve stood up and grabbed the tie off of the floor where it had fallen. He joined Danny in front of the mirror and leaned down to ghost his lips over the mark he’d made before handing him the tie. “As soon as you get back I’ll do whatever you want.”
Danny swallowed hard. “Grace is a good student. I’m sure this will be a short meeting.”
Steve smiled.
Author:
shinysylverCharacters/Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count: 630
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own Hawaii Five-0.
Summary: Steve wants her to know that Danny is taken.
Author's Note: This was written for a prompt at
h50kinkmeme. This is my second fill today. That meme is addictive. Here is the original prompt:Danny/Steve, Marking Danny
Steve has to have Danny marked/branded, he wants everyone to know D belongs to him and him only. (Hickeys, bruising, but not as in abuse, idc up to author)
Danny poked Steve’s arm which was wrapped tightly around his chest. “I need to go.”
Instead of moving his arm, Steve hooked his right leg over both of Danny’s legs and pulled him even closer, rubbing his half-hard cock against Danny’s hip in the process.
“Come on Steve, you know I have to go,” Danny said as he tried to wriggle free.
Steve sighed and loosened his grip just long enough to rise up on his knees and straddle Danny. “I hate that you’re going with her.”
Danny closed his eyes. He hated the insecurity in Steve’s voice especially since he was the one who put it there. He opened his eyes and raised a hand to rub Steve’s arm gently. “It’s a parent teacher meeting. We both have to be there.”
Steve sighed heavily. “I know. But that doesn’t mean I like it.” He glanced over Danny’s head at the clock. “You don’t have to be there until five right?”
“Right…” Danny said hesitantly. “Which means I need to leave now.”
“It means you need to leave in five minutes,” Steve corrected.
Before Danny could protest, Steve leaned down and kissed him roughly. Just as Danny started to return the kiss, Steve pulled back and began to nip his way down Danny’s jaw until he reached the sensitive spot just under Danny’s earlobe—the spot that through some sort of strange biology had a direct line to his dick.
Danny moaned and struggled not to buck his hips as Steve began to suck earnestly, pausing to lave his tongue over the sensitized skin before sucking again. “Steve—come on—everyone will see that, not just Rachel.”
Steve pulled away and looked down at Danny seriously. “Too bad.”
Danny sighed. He reached up and cupped Steve’s face gently. “I really am sorry. You know that right?”
Steve nodded but Danny saw the vulnerability in his eyes. He knew that it was going to be a long time before Steve felt comfortable with him around Rachel. Maybe he never would.
“Alright, alright,” Danny muttered looking up at Steve. It might be embarrassing to show up at a parent teacher meeting with a large hickey on his neck but if it made Steve feel better he would do it. He owed him that much. “You have two minutes to make that thing as dark as you can before I really do need to leave.”
Steve smiled and leaned down to continue his mission. Once his two minutes were up he reluctantly rolled off of Danny and leaned back against the pillow to watch as Danny got ready to leave.
Danny got up and padded over to the mirror to examine his neck. There would be a very dark bruise there before long. “What are you a vacuum cleaner? You only had five minutes.”
“I have many skills,” Steve replied. He gestured at Danny’s erect cock. “You seemed to like it well enough.”
Danny frowned down at his dick. “You just had to pick that spot under my ear. You know what it does to me.”
Steve grinned. “Yup. This way I figure you have more incentive to come home as soon as you can.”
Danny pulled on his pants and shifted around trying to hide the very obvious bulge. “You better take care of this as soon as I get back. Where’s my tie?”
Steve stood up and grabbed the tie off of the floor where it had fallen. He joined Danny in front of the mirror and leaned down to ghost his lips over the mark he’d made before handing him the tie. “As soon as you get back I’ll do whatever you want.”
Danny swallowed hard. “Grace is a good student. I’m sure this will be a short meeting.”
Steve smiled.
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Date: 2011-05-31 06:07 am (UTC)How can a hickey be this hot?
You're wicked.
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Date: 2011-05-31 06:10 am (UTC)I'm glad you liked it and I'm going to say it was the emotions behind it that made it work. :D
Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2011-05-31 06:56 am (UTC)Starts chanting *Sequel,Sequel,Sequel...* I think we all want to know what Danny wants when he gets back home;)
*PEACE AND LOVE*:)
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 06:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 09:31 pm (UTC)As you can probably tell I ship them:)
If you are interested I can pm you with slash-y links:)
*HUGS*:)
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Date: 2011-06-01 02:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-06-01 05:10 am (UTC)ENJOY!
*HUGS*:)
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Date: 2011-06-01 02:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-06-01 07:51 pm (UTC)*HUGGLES YOU*:)
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Date: 2011-05-31 07:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 02:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 08:04 am (UTC)This is so awesome it begs for a sequel... :P
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 08:17 am (UTC)I like that Danny went along with it because he understood why Steve felt the way he did(and it didn't hurt that Steve picked a spot he had trouble resisting)and I loved the way it ended.
I'd love to see what happens when Danny gets back from the meeting(lol at Grace being a good student so he was sure it would be a short meeting).
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:29 pm (UTC)I hope the OP likes it too. I'm afraid she wanted a more domineering, possessive Steve but this is what came to me. Besides I don't really write dominating D/s-y stuff which is what most of the marking fic I've read is. I'm all about relationship equality. :D
Anyway, thanks for reading!
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:58 pm (UTC)I don't think marking fic has to be D/s, but I agree with you that most of the fic I've read is that type. You did an awesome job with this one.
I think the guys (even with one of them being possessive) would be all about equality. This was awesome!
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Date: 2011-05-31 03:30 pm (UTC)I don't think marking fic has to be D/s, but I agree with you that most of the fic I've read is that type.
I think the guys (even with one of them being possessive) would be all about equality.
I'm glad other people agree. I just don't do D/s in general and especially not with this couple (not that I'm judging). To me, they fought too hard to create an equal relationship all season for me to do it any other way.
Anyway, thank you so much for reading!
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Date: 2011-05-31 05:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 09:41 am (UTC)Fab Hun xx
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-31 01:04 pm (UTC)Great work on this :)
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:23 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2011-05-31 02:36 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
Completely awesome!
Date: 2011-05-31 06:11 pm (UTC)I am well pleased! Funny part is I dont even like hickeys but the way I see it Danny needs to have one at all times..(If Steve doesnt want to put it on him, I'd be more than happy to take over.)
Thanks so much, C
Re: Completely awesome!
Date: 2011-05-31 06:23 pm (UTC)I was afraid the OP wanted something more D/s but the prompt spoke to me and I couldn't refuse it. I'm very glad you enjoyed my light, slightly angsty take on it.
You never know about a sequel. We'll see if I get inspired or not. :D